Nice manga. I like the story and the way it is structured. The foundation is solid and the manga has a nice flow. The only thing, I believe, that could have been improved in manga is the talks between the two guys. I think it needs a little bit more humour. Also the artwork is pretty incredible. I believe you could have highlighted more the facial expressions so that it could feel more real. Needless to say, the manga was amazing and keep up the work.
This is incredible work! You have a great sense of pacing, timing, and the pages are very balanced and easy to follow. These are some of the hardest things to figure out in manga, and you're starting strong with a great understanding. The next step is leveling up character anatomy and detail, but I'm confident you'll figure it out. The character designs were great, and you were able to render the eyes so carefully and engagingly. Keep at it, you're off to an excellent start
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the constructive criticism! I'm finding anatomy to be hard and there's still a lot of room for improvement. But, as you said, I'll figure it out. ^^
Thanks again! Look forward to the next release I've been working on for a while now. ✨;D
That's great! I'm subscribed to your newsletter now but if by chance I don't see it when it's up feel free to message me and I'll leave a comment. Cheers
Thank you! And sure! I'll remember to message you once it releases. ^^✨
(I'm writing a list of people who are looking forward to my next one so I won't forget to personally inform them, when it's comeplete. I'll add you to the list too. ^^)
Nice manga. I like the story and the way it is structured. The foundation is solid and the manga has a nice flow. The only thing, I believe, that could have been improved in manga is the talks between the two guys. I think it needs a little bit more humour. Also the artwork is pretty incredible. I believe you could have highlighted more the facial expressions so that it could feel more real. Needless to say, the manga was amazing and keep up the work.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback! :D ✨
Nice ngl. I like it. I'd like to give a feedback if you don't mind.
Sure! I welcome feedback. ^^
Yooo, It's soo goood.~ Eren
Hey, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment, Eren! :D ✨
This is incredible work! You have a great sense of pacing, timing, and the pages are very balanced and easy to follow. These are some of the hardest things to figure out in manga, and you're starting strong with a great understanding. The next step is leveling up character anatomy and detail, but I'm confident you'll figure it out. The character designs were great, and you were able to render the eyes so carefully and engagingly. Keep at it, you're off to an excellent start
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the constructive criticism! I'm finding anatomy to be hard and there's still a lot of room for improvement. But, as you said, I'll figure it out. ^^
Thanks again! Look forward to the next release I've been working on for a while now. ✨;D
That's great! I'm subscribed to your newsletter now but if by chance I don't see it when it's up feel free to message me and I'll leave a comment. Cheers
Thank you! And sure! I'll remember to message you once it releases. ^^✨
(I'm writing a list of people who are looking forward to my next one so I won't forget to personally inform them, when it's comeplete. I'll add you to the list too. ^^)
Awww thank you so much!! I'm really looking forward to seeing it!
Awesome! :D✨
Nice ngl. I like it. I'd like to give a feedback if you don't mind.